Writing Workshop

Some of the most powerful moments in fiction happen when a character's thoughts tell a completely different story from the words coming out of their mouth.

This challenge is all about creating tension through internal dialogue.

Now it's your turn! ✍️

Write a 300–500 word scene featuring a conversation between two characters.

On the surface, the dialogue should seem perfectly ordinary.

Beneath the surface, however, one character's internal thoughts should reveal a completely different reality. They might be hiding fear, resentment, guilt, suspicion, or a terrible secret—but none of it should be spoken aloud.

Let the contrast between what they say and what they think create the tension.

Focus on making the internal voice feel authentic, personal, and emotionally revealing.

👇 Post your work below. If you'd like feedback, let everyone know what you'd like readers to focus on. And if you have time, take a look at someone else's work too—constructive feedback helps us all grow as writers.